Faithful — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

what we believe can make the morning more like sand

but for me coffee and let my hair be the weather

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The poem is a quick, wry morning thought. The speaker starts with something big: our beliefs can turn the morning "more like sand," which suggests a day that shifts under our feet, unstable and hard to hold. Belief here seems to shape how solid or slippery the world feels, and the title, "Faithful," hints that faith is the subject being quietly tested.

Then the tone changes. Instead of wrestling with big questions, the speaker settles for something simple: coffee. Letting their hair "be the weather" is a loose, easygoing way of giving up control. Hair can be messy and unpredictable, and the speaker lets it be.

The mood is relaxed, a little humorous, and gently humble. There is uncertainty in the first lines, but the ending answers it with small comforts and acceptance. The speaker seems to find a kind of faith in ordinary routines rather than in grand certainties.

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