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Dave BontaContemplative

Independence Day: the hunters gather for archery practice in the woods.

All her neighbors have gone off on picnics & the like. Humming quietly, she assembles her new privacy fence.

Driving home after the rained-out fireworks, visibility restricted to a short cone of light on the winding road & on either side, fireflies rising from the fields.

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Bonta gives us three small scenes from Independence Day, none of them the usual parade or barbecue. In the first, hunters practice archery in the woods, a faintly odd, slightly menacing way to spend a patriotic holiday. In the second, a woman stays home while her neighbors go off to picnics, and hums to herself as she builds a privacy fence. She seems content, even if her task quietly shuts people out.

The third scene shifts the mood. The fireworks have been rained out, so the celebration fizzles. Yet the driver, creeping home along a dark road with only a short cone of headlights, sees fireflies rising from the fields on both sides. Nature supplies its own display instead.

The speaker mostly observes rather than comments. The tone is calm, wry, and a little solitary, moving from sharp edges (arrows, fences) toward something softer and unexpectedly beautiful.

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