Gardener — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

I look after the rose a rough harbor

for wings and leaves in dark, foul weather

as if that could allay rust

I itch to find wonder more than I believe in it

I cut my hair close to my head

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The speaker is a gardener who looks after a single rose, treating it as a "rough harbor" for wings and leaves when the weather turns dark and foul. The image is modest and protective: a small patch of shelter in a harsh world. But the poem doesn't let the effort feel triumphant. The speaker admits that this care is done "as if" it could hold off rust, the slow decay that gets into everything.

The most honest moment comes in the middle: the speaker itches to find wonder more than they actually believe in it. Wonder is something wanted, not something possessed. The final image, cutting the hair close to the head, feels like a small act of discipline or stripping down, as if the speaker is paring life to what's essential.

The mood is quiet, wary and a little rueful. It's tender toward fragile things, but it's clear-eyed about how limited that tenderness may be.

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