Resolutions — Poem analysis

Dave BontaContemplative

Fresh snow on New Year’s. I sweep the porch, then stand at the railing to trim my fingernails —

always an oddly satisfying job with that click of a clean bite, the surprising lack of sensation in these beetle-hard walls that line our primary instruments of touch.

I take care that each trimming stays whole, a nearly perfect crescent to admire for half a second before I add it to the instant ground below.

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Most people mark New Year's with big promises: exercise more, quit something, start something. Dave Bonta's "Resolutions" puts a man on a snowy porch with a pair of nail clippers instead. The poem is about attention. A tiny, routine act becomes a way of noticing the body, the weather and time passing, and by the end the title seems to mean something far smaller and stranger than a list of vows.

The opening is plain and quick. "Fresh snow on New Year's" is a fragment, almost a diary note, followed by two short actions: sweeping the porch, standing at the railing. Nothing grand happens, and the ordinary tone is deliberate. The speaker has already tidied the porch, and the poem then lets him add something to the clean surface. That small irony sits underneath the whole scene. The ritual of starting fresh, sweeping and trimming, produces litter, even if it is very delicate litter.

The middle stanza is where the poem looks most closely. The dash after "fingernails" leads into a sentence that hangs from the first one: "always an oddly satisfying job." The word "oddly" admits that the pleasure is a little embarrassing, and that honesty makes the speaker easy to trust. Then comes sound. "That click of a clean bite" packs hard consonants, the clicking *c* and *k* sounds and the sharp *t*, into a few syllables, so the line seems to snip as we read it. The vocabulary changes at the end of the stanza. Nails become "beetle-hard walls that line / our primary instruments of touch." The beetle comparison makes them armour, something almost insect-like, a little alien to the person wearing them. "Walls" suggests a boundary at the edge of the self. "Primary instruments of touch" sounds almost scientific, and the stiff phrasing sets up the paradox: the fingertips are our most sensitive tools, yet the nails at their edges feel nothing at all. The line break after "that line" lets the sentence spill over just as the nail edge does.

The final stanza moves from sound to sight. The speaker takes care that each clipping "stays whole, a nearly perfect crescent." That detail turns a chore into a small craft, with the aim of making something he can admire. The crescent is also a moon shape, and a new moon is a classic image of beginnings, so the poem quietly connects to the New Year without saying so. The words "nearly perfect" matter too. He isn't after flawlessness, only a modest, achievable good. The admiring lasts "half a second," and the line break after "before" makes us wait that half second ourselves.

The last line, "I add it to the instant ground below," is the most interesting. "Instant" can mean immediate: the clipping lands at once and disappears into the snow. It can also mean momentary, a ground that exists only for this moment. The reader may even hear instant coffee, the quick and ready-made. I take that last one as a possible pun, not a certainty. "Ground" is also the thing that receives and absorbs everything, which gives this small act a faint sense of burial and return. The poem ends on "below," a falling word, and it echoes "snow" from the opening line, so the poem is framed by a faint rhyme between where it begins and where its small crescents end up.

There is no regular rhyme or meter. The poem is free verse in three stanzas of four, five and four lines, and its rhythm follows speech and the pace of the task. Sentences run on across line breaks, and the last stanza is a single unhurried thought. Because there are no conventional poetic effects to lean on, the details have to do the work.

That is where the poem's value lies. It suggests that a resolution need not be a plan for self-improvement. It can be a decision to pay attention, to take care over something nobody will see, and to let it go gracefully. The speaker makes no promise at the start of the year. He performs a tiny act of care and lets the snow take the result, and the poem asks us to value that kind of care.

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