Woke up this morning (blues haiku) — Summary

Woke up this morning to a thump on the window: false sky. A dead bird.

Woke up this morning with a fierce new itching on the soles of my feet.

Woke up this morning from someone else’s nightmare — I was the monster.

Woke up this morning to the shapeless summer song of a winter wren.

Woke up this morning & stared into the clock’s blank face: the power’s out.

Woke up this morning several hours too early: the moonlight tricked me.

Woke up this morning to the murmured sweet nothings of an empty stomach.

Woke up this morning with yesterday’s shoulder ache settled in my spine.

Woke up this morning to patches of frost in the yard. I got your letter.

Woke up this morning with the reds & the yellows. Another autumn.

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Bonta borrows the blues habit of starting every verse with the same line, "Woke up this morning," and squeezes each one into a haiku. What follows is a string of small, odd moments rather than one story. A bird hits the window, a dream turns the sleeper into the monster, the power goes out, an empty stomach grumbles.

The speaker sounds wry and a little worn down. Nothing dramatic happens, but there is a steady undercurrent of loss and discomfort: the dead bird, the aching spine, the clock with its blank face. The humor keeps it from getting heavy, especially the "sweet nothings" of hunger.

The ninth stanza shifts things. Frost in the yard sits beside "I got your letter," and the reader is left to guess what the letter means. The final lines, with their reds and yellows, settle on "Another autumn," which suggests time passing and a quiet acceptance. The overall mood is gentle, observant, and tinged with melancholy.

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