Alien — Summary

Dave BontaRomantic

The sea beneath your minimal spacecraft turns adamant, grows scales like a lizard. A superhero saves you from a swarm of devious roses, cape flapping melodramatically, his last lost cause still clinging to his side. A green-skinned native emerges from the shelter of trees, offering to wrap you in the flag of her country. Dangerous planet for a would-be goddess. Everyone wants to enlist you in their battles. I suspect they won’t take love for an answer.

Show the whole poemHide the poem

Learn Poems app

Try the Learn Poems app

Everything from the website trainer, and more: new exercises, voice recording and sharing, reminders, quick review.

Dave Bonta's "Alien" drops "you" into something like a comic-book or science-fiction world where nothing stays stable. The sea turns hard and scaly, roses attack in swarms, and a superhero rescues you with a flapping cape and the baggage of his failed causes. The tone is playful and a little absurd, as if the speaker is narrating a strange dream.

Underneath the fun, the poem is about being an outsider whom everyone tries to claim. The green-skinned native offers to wrap you in her country's flag, and the line "Everyone wants / to enlist you in their battles" makes the pattern clear. Being called a "would-be goddess" suggests that "you" has power, or at least seems to, and that power makes people want to recruit you.

The last two lines shift the mood. The speaker's "I suspect" sounds quiet and slightly wry, and the hope that love might be an answer feels tender against all the noise. The speaker seems doubtful that anyone will accept it.

Read also

More by Dave Bonta

All poems
ContemplativeDave Bonta

Fairy Bells

Prosartes lanuginosa Their ringing isn’t obvious; you need the ear of an anchorite to find them.
CheerfulDave Bonta

Homunculus

Within my mind a mind I long to tame— a left boy, a little Hercules, the king of ham.