Ramifications — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

The bottle is the message the river sends to the sea: Aquafina.

Since the leaves came out, the tree’s shadow no longer resembles a tree.

Sunrise catches a rabbit in the tall grass, the veins in its ears.

A second set of lines in the palm I rested on: more leaves in my future.

Bobbing in the wind, the moccasin flower’s red-threaded net.

Seventeen times sadder than fallen cherry blossoms: cicada wings.

Under the bark, that locust log was wearing white fishnet hose.

Tree-shaped print in the sand where the tide went out — its shining trunk.

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Dave Bonta's "Ramifications" is a series of tiny, haiku-like glimpses, each built around something the speaker notices outdoors. A plastic water bottle floats downstream like a message to the sea, and the joke is that its only words are a brand name. A tree's shadow stops looking like a tree once it has leaves. A rabbit's ears glow with veins in the sunrise. The lines on the speaker's palm look like branches, or leaves.

What ties these moments together is the way nature keeps echoing itself: veins become leaves, hands become trees, wings become fishnet, and a footprint-like mark in the sand becomes a shining trunk. The title's "ramifications" fits this branching pattern.

The speaker seems quietly attentive, amused one moment and tender the next, as in the line about cicada wings being sadder than cherry blossoms. The mood is calm, curious and a little wistful, like a slow walk where you keep stopping to look closer.

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