The Cooper — Poem analysis

He made the wooden barrels with great care, Proud of each keg and barrel that he made. A craftsman, he, who thought it only fair To give his best while working at his trade.

With loving hands he fashioned every stave, And fitted all the hoops with superb skill. To me, it seemed his shop made him a slave, But no slave ever worked with such a will.

When we were boys, he used to call us in To give us staves he had made into skis. Later, I learned they came from his best bin. How fine a trade, whose first thought is to please!

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A barrel-maker is not an obvious hero for a poem, and that is part of what makes "The Cooper" by E. H. Johnson worth a second look. Nothing dramatic happens in these twelve lines. A man makes barrels, does it well, and is remembered by a speaker who once received a small gift from him. Yet the poem builds, quietly, toward a claim about what work can mean: that a trade done with care is a way of caring for other people.

The first stanza sets out the cooper's character in plain, almost proverbial terms. He is "proud of each keg and barrel that he made," and the repetition of "made" in the first and second lines gives the opening a steady, workmanlike thump. The phrase "only fair" is the key to his ethics. The cooper does not see his excellence as heroic or exceptional; he sees it as the fair thing to do, a debt owed to whoever will use the barrel. Johnson's word for him, "craftsman," arrives with the weight of a verdict, and the stanza's last line, "To give his best while working at his trade," turns the whole matter into a form of giving rather than of earning.

The second stanza introduces the poem's one real tension. The speaker admits that the cooper's shop "made him a slave," the sort of judgment a bystander might pass on a man bent daily over wood and iron hoops. The next line pushes back: "no slave ever worked with such a will." The pun is neat. A "will" is both an act of choice and a faculty of freedom, so the very quality that seems to prove servitude, tireless effort, actually proves the opposite. The speaker is quietly correcting his own earlier impression, and the grammar helps: the sentence pivots on "But," the shortest and most decisive word in the stanza. The vocabulary of the craft also does double duty here. "Stave" and "hoops" are real barrel parts, but "with loving hands he fashioned every stave" tells us the work is emotional as well as technical.

The final stanza shifts from description to memory, and from general praise to a specific act. The cooper calls the boys in and gives them "staves he had made into skis." Staves are the curved strips of a barrel, so turning them into skis is a small piece of improvisation, a craftsman's skill spent on children's play. The speaker's later discovery that they came from "his best bin" is the emotional core of the poem. The cooper never announced his generosity; it was found out afterwards, which makes it more convincing. The best materials went to boys who would have been happy with scraps, and who could not have told the difference.

Structurally, the poem is tidy, as befits its subject. It is written in three quatrains rhyming ABAB (made/fair, trade; stave/slave, skill/will; in/bin, skis/please), in a rhythm that stays close to the iambic pentameter line, with ten syllables and a regular rise and fall. The metre, like the cooper's hoops, holds the lines snugly together without drawing attention to itself. Only once does the pattern feel stretched: the last line, "How fine a trade, whose first thought is to please!", ends with an exclamation, the single moment where the speaker's feeling is allowed to show openly. It is also the poem's thesis, offered as admiration rather than argument.

What makes the poem worth reading is its modest, unfashionable idea. Many poems celebrate ambition, passion or suffering; this one celebrates a man whose first thought is to please. It suggests that quality is a moral matter, and that the best way to honour other people may be to do your own job as if they were watching, even when no one is.

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