Epitaphs — Poem analysis

E. H. JohnsonContemplative

Their names are written on the sides Of boxcars in which they hook rides. Their names also appear on shacks Along the miles of railroad tracks.

I have often wondered why it’s so, And now at last I think I know; The reason why their names appear, Is due to wistfulness, it’s clear.

For hoboes are lonely, vagrant souls, Without real roots and clear-cut goals, Who long to leave some lasting sign To prove they, too, shared Life’s design.

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Anyone who has waited at a railroad crossing has seen the scrawl: names, initials and symbols chalked or painted along the sides of freight cars as they rumble past. E. H. Johnson's "Epitaphs" starts from that ordinary sight and asks a question most people never think to ask. Why do the people who ride these trains leave their names behind? The poem's answer is that the signatures are a quiet form of longing, a way for people with almost nothing to insist that they were here.

The structure mirrors the way a puzzle gets solved. The first stanza simply reports what the speaker has noticed: names on boxcars, names on shacks "along the miles of railroad tracks." The second stanza turns inward. "I have often wondered why it's so, / And now at last I think I know." That small shift from observation to curiosity gives the poem a conversational, almost confiding tone, as if the speaker were sharing a private discovery with the reader. The third stanza delivers the explanation, and it arrives with a certain gentle authority. Notice that the speaker says "I think I know," not "I know." The answer is offered as an interpretation, and the poem is honest about that.

The title is the most striking choice in the poem. An epitaph is what we carve on a gravestone, the last words that stand in for a life once it is over. By calling these scribbled names "Epitaphs," Johnson suggests that the hoboes are writing their own memorials while still alive. The word carries a faint sadness: these men expect to be forgotten, so they inscribe themselves on moving metal and flimsy shacks, surfaces that will be repainted, scrapped or torn down. The irony is worth pausing on. A real epitaph is cut into stone to last; these are written on things built to travel away and to rust. The impulse toward permanence is real, but the materials betray it.

Johnson's word choices tighten this idea. The hoboes are "lonely, vagrant souls," and "souls" lifts them above the usual contemptuous labels for people who ride the rails. They are "without real roots and clear-cut goals," a phrase whose botanical image of roots makes their rootlessness feel almost physical, like plants that cannot take hold of any soil. Their names, by contrast, are what stays planted along the tracks. The key word, though, is "wistfulness," placed in the second stanza and then echoed by the longing to "leave some lasting sign." Wistfulness is a soft, gentle form of wanting, not fierce ambition. It fits the poem's attitude toward its subjects: sympathy without sentimentality, understanding without excuses.

The form is simple and deliberately so. The poem is written in rhyming couplets (sides/rides, shacks/tracks, so/know, appear/clear, souls/goals, sign/design), and the lines move in a steady, singsong rhythm of roughly four beats, close to the feel of a nursery rhyme or a ballad. That plain music suits the subject. It also echoes the rhythm of the rails themselves, the regular clatter of wheels over joints, which gives the poem a kind of travelling pulse. Some of the rhymes are a little predictable, and the final line, with "design" tipping over onto its own short line, feels slightly cramped. Yet the ending lands with a neat double meaning: the hoboes want to prove they "shared Life's design," as though existence were a pattern or plan and they feared being left out of it. Their names are a protest against being invisible within that pattern.

What makes the poem worth reading is its generosity of attention. It takes something many people dismiss as graffiti, and a group many people overlook entirely, and finds in them a recognisable human need. Nearly everyone wants evidence that their life mattered, whether through children, work, or a name carved into a school desk. Johnson reminds us that this need does not disappear when a person has no home, no steady job and no fixed address. It only finds humbler places to write itself down.

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