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No prodigal but has turned In his dreams To behold that portal, Gateway to yesterday Refuge for a thousand Tomorrows —

Seeing it open for him Like patient arms For letting go — and for Taking back —

Host to his dreams! Above conquest, beyond purchase, Impervious to his squalor Or his taste . . . recording nothing But his going out And his coming in . . .

Offering the hearth where The prodigal of living warms His hands — speeding his going! Welcoming his coming back.

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Most people hear the word "home" and picture a building. Louise Louis gives us a doorway instead, and then lets that doorway do all the work. "Home" is about the one place that stays unchanged while everything in a life moves, and its central claim is a gentle, slightly startling one: home matters less as somewhere we stay than as somewhere we are free to leave and certain to return to.

The poem's governing figure is the prodigal, borrowed from the old story of the wayward son who goes away and comes back. Louis opens by making him universal: "No prodigal but has turned / In his dreams / To behold that portal." The double negative sweeps everyone in. Nobody who has ever wandered, the line implies, has wandered without looking back. The door itself is called a "Gateway to yesterday" and a "Refuge for a thousand / Tomorrows," and the pairing is clever. Home faces both directions at once, holding the past and standing guard over a future of countless returns. The line break after "thousand" makes the reader wait a beat for "Tomorrows," as if the promise were being stretched out toward the horizon.

Then comes the image that gives the poem its warmth: the door "open for him / Like patient arms / For letting go — and for / Taking back." The surprise is in the first purpose. We expect a home to welcome, but Louis insists it also releases. The dash before "and for" works almost like a hinge, swinging the sentence from departure to return, and the stark, broken lines leave "letting go" and "taking back" balanced like two halves of one gesture. The word "patient" matters too. This door does not plead or sulk; it waits.

The middle stanza turns more abstract, and more daring. Home is "Above conquest, beyond purchase," which sets it outside both violence and money, the two ways people usually claim things. It is also "Impervious to his squalor / Or his taste," a phrase worth slowing down on. Whatever condition the traveller is in, ruined or refined, the house does not judge. Its only act is to keep a record, and a strangely minimal one: it notes "nothing / But his going out / And his coming in." That echoes the cadence of an old blessing, with its coming and going, and the ellipses that trail off after "recording nothing" and "coming in" let the sentence drift quietly, the way a memory does.

Formally, the poem is free verse, with no regular rhyme and no fixed metre. The short, uneven lines, often only two or three stresses, suit the subject. A rhymed, marching poem would feel like a house with rules, and Louis wants the opposite. Rhythm instead comes from repetition: "going out" and "coming in," then "speeding his going" and "Welcoming his coming back." The final stanza closes the circle by repeating the poem's two verbs in new forms, so the structure itself makes the return it describes.

The last stanza also contains the poem's best paradox. The hearth where "The prodigal of living warms / His hands" is "speeding his going!" Warmth does not hold him back; it sends him out better equipped. Here "prodigal of living" quietly redefines the word. He is no longer only a runaway but someone who spends himself generously on life itself, and the exclamation mark after "going" feels almost like a cheer.

What makes the poem significant is how it reverses a common assumption. We tend to think of home as the opposite of adventure, the thing we trade away to be free. Louis argues that the two depend on each other: it is the certainty of the open door that makes the leaving possible. In a handful of short lines, she turns a plain word into an argument about love, and about the kind of security that sets people loose rather than keeping them in.

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