Around Thanksgiving — Poem analysis

Rolfe HumphriesContemplative

Pure gold, they said in her praise: So I walk my autumn ways, Around me a golden haze

From the ground, in leaves, in air— Oh, everywhere, everywhere!— To save, to spend, and to share.

By the door, with evening light, Westering, lingering late Over lane and lawn and lot

The leaves of the lilac hold The shape of the heart, pure gold, As if I need to be told,

As if I need reminding, Toward chill November's ending, Of warmth and love abounding.

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Praise is a strange thing to carry around. Rolfe Humphries opens "Around Thanksgiving" with a compliment that arrives secondhand: "Pure gold, they said in her praise." We never learn who "they" are or who "she" is, and the poem has no interest in telling us. What matters is what the speaker does with the phrase. He takes it out for a walk. The words that once described a person seem to seep into the landscape until the whole autumn world is shimmering with them, "a golden haze" hanging over everything.

The central idea is a quiet one: gratitude is a way of seeing. Thanksgiving, in the title, is a holiday, but in the poem it becomes a habit of attention. The golden haze rises "from the ground, in leaves, in air," and the speaker's exclamation, "Oh, everywhere, everywhere!", has the breathless quality of someone who has just noticed how much there is. Notice, too, the three verbs that close the second stanza: "To save, to spend, and to share." Gold is something you can hoard or spend, and the poem hints that its real value lies in the third verb. Warmth, like a harvest, is meant to be passed around.

The poem's construction is small and tightly controlled. It is built from four three-line stanzas, and its lines are short, mostly just a few beats each, which gives it a light, almost song-like pace. Rhyme does a lot of the work, though not always in the same way. The first two stanzas lock into a single rhyme each: "praise," "ways," "haze," then "air," "everywhere," "share." The echo is simple and insistent, like a refrain. In the third stanza the pattern loosens: "light," "late," and "lot" are linked by alliteration and near-sound rather than true rhyme. Then in the final stanza the rhymes return, though now they are softer and more elaborate: "reminding," "ending," "abounding" share their closing syllables, a rhyme of participles that sounds like something slowly unfolding rather than snapping shut.

The sound-play in the third stanza deserves a closer look. "Westering, lingering late / Over lane and lawn and lot" is dense with l-sounds, and you can almost feel the light stretching out across the ground. "Westering" is an unusual, slightly old-fashioned word for the sun moving toward the west, and paired with "lingering" it slows the line down, just as a late-autumn evening seems to hold on a little longer than it should. The light behaves the way the speaker's mood does: reluctant to leave.

Then comes the poem's best image. The lilac's leaves "hold / The shape of the heart." This is an observation the reader can check against the real world, since lilac leaves are indeed broadly heart-shaped, and Humphries lets a plain botanical fact carry the emotional weight of the poem. The heart is not imposed on nature; it was there all along, waiting to be noticed. And the word "hold" matters. The leaves are not just shaped like hearts, they hold that shape, as if keeping it safe through the turning of the season. Gold and heart arrive together here ("The shape of the heart, pure gold"), finally reconnecting the opening praise with the thing it was praising.

What follows is a gently self-mocking moment: "As if I need to be told, / As if I need reminding." The speaker half-protests that he does not need such lessons, and yet the whole poem is the evidence that he does. This small confession is what gives the ending its honesty. The reminder comes "toward chill November's ending," when warmth is least obvious and most necessary, and the closing phrase, "warmth and love abounding," lands as a conclusion the speaker has earned by looking, not as a sermon he has delivered.

The poem is significant for its restraint. It could easily have become sentimental, yet it keeps its eyes on concrete things: a doorway, a lane, a lilac bush. It suggests that the abundance we celebrate at Thanksgiving is not only on the table but also in the ordinary light on the lawn, and that sometimes it takes a borrowed compliment to make us notice it.

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