Quatrains 15 — Poem analysis

For Hope is like the winds that lightly blow Out of the lingering sunset's golden bar, Lifting the woodland's wealth of leaves to show The shining wonder of the evening star.

Learn Poems app

Try the Learn Poems app

Everything from the website trainer, and more: new exercises, voice recording and sharing, reminders, quick review.

Four lines, one sentence, and a single comparison: Hope, the speaker says, is like a wind. What makes the quatrain linger is how much this small simile manages to carry. It does not argue that hope is valuable or tell us how to feel. It lets a quiet landscape do the persuading.

The poem opens on the word "For," which makes it sound as though we have walked in halfway through a thought. Whatever came before, whether another quatrain or an unspoken doubt, the speaker is now offering a reason, a justification for believing in something. This small connective gives the poem a faintly consoling tone, like someone gently finishing an explanation to a person who needs reassurance. We never learn what the despair or uncertainty was, and the poem does not need us to.

The central image is built in careful stages. The wind comes "out of the lingering sunset's golden bar," so it is born at the edge of the day, from a band of light low on the horizon. The word "lingering" matters here: the light is reluctant to leave, and that reluctance colours the whole scene with tenderness. Then the wind moves "lightly," a gentle adverb that rules out any idea of hope as a violent or dramatic force. It is a soft, almost unnoticed thing. Yet it does something real: it lifts "the woodland's wealth of leaves." The word "wealth" is a nice choice, suggesting a thick, abundant canopy that would normally hide the sky. Hope does not remove this abundance; it parts it, just enough to reveal what lay behind.

What is revealed is "the shining wonder of the evening star." The poem has moved from sunset to the first star, from fading light to a smaller but more lasting one. Here the idea sits at its deepest. Hope appears at the very moment the day is ending, and what it shows is not a return of the sun but a different kind of brightness that darkness makes visible. The poem seems to say that hope is not the denial of dusk. It is the thing that lets us see the star that only dusk can offer. The evening star is also a word-pair that holds both endings and beginnings, since it appears as day closes and night opens.

The form supports this gentleness. The quatrain rhymes ABAB, with "blow" and "show" enclosing "bar" and "star," so the sounds alternate and then settle, much as the wind rises and falls. The lines run in a smooth, flowing iambic pattern of about ten syllables, close to the traditional pentameter line, and the single sentence carries the reader from the first line to the last without a full stop to break the movement. Because we cannot pause, we are carried upward through the sunset, across the woods and finally to the star, ending on the highest point. Even the sounds cooperate: the soft, open vowels and the repeated "l" and "w" sounds in "lingering," "lightly," "lifting," "woodland's," "wealth" and "leaves" create a hush, an almost whispered music.

The quatrain is significant less for novelty than for precision of tone. Comparing hope to something natural and light is an old and familiar move, but the poem refines it by choosing a specific moment, a specific motion and a specific reward. Hope here is modest, patient and unforced, and it works by revealing rather than by conquering. For a reader, the pleasure is in how little the poem insists. It trusts a sunset, a breeze and a single star to make its case, and in doing so it suggests that hope is most convincing when it is quietest.

Read also

More by Thomas S. Jones Jr.

All poems
RomanticThomas S. Jones Jr.

Quatrains 8

As from the rising moon a single beam Of trembling silver sinks through moving walls Of dim green water, so the immortal dream Of Love Eternal on the spirit falls.
DreamyThomas S. Jones Jr.

The Unicorn

Roses grow reddest through a briery hedge,— There baffled hunters, pierced by barb and thorn, Behold, far off, the silver Unicorn, Flame-like and still upon a mossy ledge ;
ContemplativeThomas S. Jones Jr.

Truth

A breath of beauty blown through Spring's green bowers, The glory of a rainbow in the spray, The first ethereal rose when waking day Smiles through a fragrant mist of dreaming flowers;