The Old Cottagers — Poem analysis

John ClareContemplative

The little cottage stood alone, the pride Of solitude surrounded every side. Bean fields in blossom almost reached the wall; A garden with its hawthorn hedge was all The space between.--Green light did pass Through one small window, where a looking-glass Placed in the parlour, richly there revealed A spacious landscape and a blooming field. The pasture cows that herded on the moor Printed their footsteps to the very door, Where little summer flowers with seasons blow And scarcely gave the eldern leave to grow. The cuckoo that one listens far away Sung in the orchard trees for half the day; And where the robin lives, the village guest, In the old weedy hedge the leafy nest Of the coy nightingale was yearly found, Safe from all eyes as in the loneliest ground; And little chats that in bean stalks will lie A nest with cobwebs there will build, and fly Upon the kidney bean that twines and towers Up little poles in wreaths of scarlet flowers.

There a lone couple lived, secluded there From all the world considers joy or care, Lived to themselves, a long lone journey trod, And through their Bible talked aloud to God; While one small close and cow their wants maintained, But little needing, and but little gained. Their neighbour's name was peace, with her they went, With tottering age, and dignified content, Through a rich length of years and quiet days, And filled the neighbouring village with their praise.

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Everything in John Clare's cottage is small, and everything in it is enough. That is the quiet argument of "The Old Cottagers", a poem that starts by describing a building and ends by describing a whole way of life. Clare grew up in the English countryside he writes about, and the poem reads like the work of someone who has looked closely. He never tells us to admire the couple. He piles up small, exact details until admiration seems the only possible response.

The first section, more than twenty lines long, never leaves the cottage's surroundings, and nature keeps pressing in on the building. Bean fields "almost" reach the wall, cows have "printed their footsteps to the very door", and wildflowers "scarcely gave the eldern leave to grow". The garden is the only "space between" the house and the wild, and the poem's one broken-off line says so: "The space between.--Green light did pass". The line is shorter than its neighbours, and the dash and the stumbling "did pass" make it feel squeezed, as the space itself is. The best image is the looking-glass in the parlour, which "richly" reveals "a spacious landscape and a blooming field". The room is tiny, yet the mirror makes the whole countryside part of the furniture. Clare seems to be saying that the couple's wealth is the view.

The birds work the same way. The cuckoo sings in the orchard "for half the day", and the "coy nightingale" hides its nest "safe from all eyes as in the loneliest ground". That phrase quietly echoes the human couple, who are just as hidden and just as safe. Even the kidney bean, climbing "little poles in wreaths of scarlet flowers", gets a faint grandeur from the verb "towers" and the word "wreaths", which suggest victory garlands. A bean-pole becomes a monument. The word "little" keeps returning, in the little cottage, little flowers, little chats and little poles, until smallness stops sounding like a lack and starts to sound like a virtue.

Loneliness is the other repeated idea. "Alone", "solitude", "lone", "lonely" and "loneliest" all appear, yet the mood is never sad. Clare uses isolation as a positive thing: the couple are "secluded there / From all the world considers joy or care", so they escape both the world's pleasures and its worries. The sound of the phrase "a long lone journey trod" has a slow, plodding rhythm, like two old people walking. Then comes the poem's most moving line, "through their Bible talked aloud to God". The Bible isn't only read here but turned into conversation, so the couple are never really without company.

The form supports this. The poem is written in rhyming couplets of ten-syllable lines, a neat and balanced pattern, and the pairs of lines close like small gates. Clare often lets a sentence run on past the rhyme ("a looking-glass / Placed in the parlour, richly there revealed"), which keeps the couplets from sounding rigid. The final ten lines are plainer and more summarising. The couple's needs are met by "one small close and cow", and they are said to be "but little needing, and but little gained". The balanced phrasing makes the point itself: little wanted, little gained, nothing missing.

The ending turns on personification. In a place without neighbours, the couple's "neighbour's name was peace", and they walk with her "with tottering age, and dignified content". "Tottering" is honest about frailty, while "dignified" refuses to pity it, and Clare keeps both words in the same line. The final claim, that they "filled the neighbouring village with their praise", is pleasingly ambiguous. It may mean the villagers praised them, or it may hint that their lives were a kind of praise. The title and the past tense ("stood", "lived") suggest the poem is also a memorial, though that is an inference from the grammar rather than anything the poem says outright.

What makes the poem worth reading is its reversal of ordinary ideas of richness. Nothing happens in it, nobody is important, and the couple own almost nothing, yet the language of wealth ("richly", "rich length of years", "spacious") is given to them. The poem asks us to measure a life by attention and contentment instead of property, and it makes the case through bean flowers, a mirror and a hidden nest.

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