moonflower — Summary

akchiisRomantic

i dedicate to you, a single moon flower, pristine ivory petals delicately resting upon its fruit, arrangement reminiscent of the stars in your eyes. vines curling amongst the thick foliage of the vast woods in which giants roam, in this land of fantasy where i bloom, just for you, at the darkest hours of the night, where my affections lay.

i dedicate to you, this pearl of lune, even as it spills out of my lungs, reducing me to a heaving, beautiful mess with its vines creeping into my heart, wrenching out whatever there is left of this love, taking seed in this hollow cavity of a body which longs, yet is not to ever receive.

i dedicate to you, the mourning's glory, as when the dawn arrives, i will no longer be here. i have expended the last of my beauty, joining the fallen, as beasts once more rule these lands, as i lay in desolate hope,

as i await my new saviour.

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The speaker offers a moonflower to someone they love, and the flower is also the speaker. Each stanza begins with the same gift, "i dedicate to you," like a repeated vow. At first the mood is dreamy and tender: pale petals, starry eyes, a fantasy forest where the speaker blooms only at night, only for this person.

Then the beauty turns painful. The flower spills from the speaker's lungs and creeps into the heart, so the love feels like something growing inside and slowly consuming the body. The speaker longs for someone who, it seems, will never love them back.

By the end, the tone is quiet and resigned. Dawn will come and the speaker will be gone, their beauty used up. The final line, "as i await my new saviour," is ambiguous. It might hint at hope for rescue or renewal, or simply at a lonely wait. The overall feeling is bittersweet: gentle, romantic, and sad.

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