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akchiisRomantic

on the autumn riddled wound path to my home, the reddened leaves crack and falter under my footsteps, fragile facade of beauty trembling under my crushing abyss, sinking, fall's composed magic crumbles under my solemn weight.

ghosts of smells i once loved fill the air. letting the ashy air grasp my empty hands, i feel a sincere warmth from within, radiating, sinking in and becoming one, unfaltering unlike the ground beneath me, steady, fortified, safe; an unshakable foundation.

the world is still painted in the same monochrome as it always has been; the four seasons change just as how my feelings falter as they pass by. but all i can have now is the homely scent of warm spice and flora, my sweaty palms, the lunar eclipse in your eyes and the swirling abyss of my newfound youth, for no matter what stars i see in any other, i shall still be drawn into, and return to only, only you.

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A speaker walks a leaf-covered path toward home in autumn, and the poem slowly turns from heaviness to devotion. At first the mood is sombre. The red leaves break under each step, and the speaker feels almost guilty, as if their own weight is crushing something beautiful. Then the air carries the "ghosts" of smells once loved, and a steady warmth settles inside, a sense of being grounded and safe.

By the end, the poem becomes a love confession. The world looks colourless and the seasons keep changing, just as the speaker's feelings have faded and shifted. Yet what remains is the comfort of home, nervous sweaty palms, and the eyes of one particular person. Even if other people seem like stars, the speaker says they will always come back to "only, only you." The mood is quiet, nostalgic and tender, with a hint of sadness underneath, but it finishes on certainty and belonging.

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