biological reaction — Summary

akchiisRomantic

with just a glance, i feel my body roaring to life, with every cell rising up in a passion as if in response to you, my nerves sizzle with the stimulation as heat rushes through me, filling me up with great excitement as warmth envelopes me and nestles deeply in my chest. this biological reaction, this primal need for fulfilment, of starved crevices which yearn, brimming with red hot desire, sending jolts of electricity down my spine through my fingertips, finally bursting out as

i see you smile, just as you always do, and my body slows with a shuddering jolt. suddenly, all i can taste in my mouth is the overwhelming sweetness of you, you, you.

Show the whole poemHide the poem

Learn Poems app

Try the Learn Poems app

Everything from the website trainer, and more: new exercises, voice recording and sharing, reminders, quick review.

Here, falling for someone is treated almost like a science experiment gone wild. The speaker sees the person they desire and feels their whole body react: cells "rising up," nerves sizzling, heat gathering in the chest. The title, "biological reaction," fits the way the speaker describes love as something physical and instinctive, a "primal need" that arrives before any thought can step in.

The first stanza is one long, breathless sentence that builds and builds, mirroring the rush of feeling, until it breaks off mid-thought at "bursting out as." Then comes the surprise. The release is not a grand gesture but a simple moment: the beloved smiles, as they always do. The speaker's body "slows with a shuddering jolt," and all they can taste is sweetness, repeated in "you, you, you." The mood is giddy, intense, and a little overwhelmed, a feeling so big it leaves the speaker nearly speechless.

Read also

More by akchiis

All poems
Sadakchiis

frost

frost, i breathe in, the freezing air filling my lungs, bleeding into my veins, chilling to the bone, as it spreads throughout
Romanticakchiis

what i love about loving you, with love

i write this with an inexperienced hand, one not yet rough with the calluses of another whose seen nirvana with their own eyes, one not scarred with the