percussive function — Summary

akchiisContemplative

love lies in those beheld, and with it, you also find love. it exists in the insignificant; in the gentle grinding of the mallet on metal keys, in the incessant rumbling of wood on the carpet, in the glistening sweat beaded on drumsticks and the bleary-eyed stares at those scores with just-too-many-notes-and-rests to count. it lies hidden in the musty scent of the paths walked by generations, the residue warmth and comfort remains dormant in its essence - in the conjoining of scrapes and blisters, in the aching wrists and forearms, walking hand-in-sticks through the hellfire suddenly makes me realise that in the places where the light is naught and the shadows deepen its reach, a glimmer of hope lay in that semicircle, where only through the loving of others can one learn to love oneself, at all

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The speaker finds love in the small, unglamorous details of being a percussionist: mallets tapping metal keys, wooden sticks rumbling over carpet, sweaty drumsticks, and tired eyes squinting at scores crammed with notes and rests. These ordinary things, the poem suggests, are where love quietly lives. It also sits in the "musty scent" of paths that earlier generations walked, a leftover warmth that feels comforting even while dormant.

The mood shifts as the poem goes on. Scrapes, blisters and aching wrists make the practice sound like a trial, "hellfire" that the speaker walks through "hand-in-sticks." Yet this hardship leads to a sudden realisation. In dark places, a "glimmer of hope" appears in the semicircle, which seems to be the group of players the speaker belongs to. The closing idea is gentle and sincere: you learn to love yourself only by loving others. The tone is warm, tired and quietly hopeful.

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