Saving a Tree — Poem analysis

Smiling in his Stihl chainsaw hat, had the arborist saved the tree from itself or from me? Had he saved my house or my neighbors’ from the heavy limbs? Maybe nothing

was ever going to fall, he told me gently as I wrote the check and we looked up admiringly at his work. When he left, I called to tell you how I knew

I was the tree that fell in the forest and nobody heard it. So did it make a sound? You said, Mandy, it made a sound, and you heard it, so tell me all about it. I told you,

I love you and I will.

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A smiling man in a Stihl chainsaw hat is not the usual start to a poem about despair, and that is part of Amanda Laughtland's trick. The opening is so ordinary that it takes a moment to notice how much the speaker is asking of the scene. The arborist has trimmed a tree, the speaker has paid him, and yet the first thing she wonders is whether he "saved the tree / from itself or from me?" The question sounds like a joke, but it has a crack in it. Why would the tree need saving from her?

The poem builds on that crack. The speaker moves from the tree to her house, then to her neighbors', and imagines "the heavy limbs" coming down. "Heavy limbs" works well here, since the phrase can describe branches or a body weighed down. The arborist's reply is gentle and a little deflating: "Maybe nothing / was ever going to fall." The line break after "nothing" lets the word hang, so for a split second the sentence says that nothing is there at all. I'd read that as the poem's emotional hinge, though the text only hints at it. The danger may have been smaller than she feared, but the poem never says the fear itself was false. The two of them look up "admiringly / at his work," a tidy, polite image. A pruned tree looks fine from the street, and the poem seems to be asking how fine things look from the inside.

Then comes the turn. Once the arborist leaves, the speaker phones someone to say she knows she "was the tree that fell in the forest / and nobody heard it." The old riddle about whether an unheard sound exists suddenly becomes personal. The poem never tells us what the fall was. It gives no event, no cause, no name for the trouble. That silence suits the situation, since the speaker is in the position of someone who has felt something collapse without being able to prove it happened. Even the phone call, with its mundane "I called to tell you," carries the awkwardness of trying to say something large in a small voice.

The reply is the best moment in the poem. The friend answers the riddle in the plainest way possible: "Mandy, / it made a sound, and you heard it, / so tell me all about it." Notice how the words "sound" and "heard" are taken from the speaker's own question and handed back to her as facts. Being addressed by a nickname also matters. After a poem of careful, slightly guarded wording, "Mandy" lands as warm and a little blunt. The philosophical puzzle gets a human solution. A sound exists if somebody is willing to listen, and the listener here asks for the full story rather than a summary.

The form supports this quietly. The poem is free verse, with no rhyme and a conversational rhythm made of short sentences and casual asides, like "When he left." Three five-line stanzas end each time on a half-finished thought: "Maybe nothing," "I knew," "I told you." Each stanza ends on a hesitation and the next one begins by finishing it. Sentences spill over the gaps the way a person might keep talking because stopping would be harder. Then the poem does something different. It ends on a single line standing alone: "I love you and I will." After fifteen lines of hovering, the sudden directness feels like a door opening. The line answers the friend's request, since "I will" promises to tell the whole story. It also finally makes the speaker's reply audible.

What makes the poem significant is how it deals with the idea of being "saved." The title suggests the arborist's job, and the opening wonders whether his work was needed at all. By the end, the saving that matters has nothing to do with a chainsaw. It happens in a phone call, when one person says her fall made a sound and the other says she heard it. Laughtland takes a worn-out thought experiment and answers it in under a hundred words with tenderness, humor, and no ornament.

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