Save My Soul — Summary

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The iced winds calm my thoughts They crash on the cliffs The froth building upon impact Save my soul Help me out of this hole Alone with the storm, I clamber onto scraps of flotsam I yearn to yomp out of these gallows But you pull me back in Save my soul. The winds get wilder The waves stronger Untameable A pause. No wind. Peace. Calm replaces chaos. Once more The storm returns Never have I felt so lost Yet warm As the the waves crash A cacophony of cries follow Of agony, Joy, Confused by these remote conditions Solitary as an oyster I wander under the light of your moonbow The cerulean waves Glimmer as they throw themselves on the rocks Whose features were soft Yet pronounced (ever so slightly) Sweet songs that sirens sing Soothing, Swirling, In my head Easing the agonising pain Wont you save my soul Sweet siren? Singing once again I felt my heart beat My hands quiver It seems I am being lifted Away from this torment Away from this Hell The voice stops My heart sinks My hands tied I am still shackled from inside.

Save my soul.

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Amy's "Save My Soul" places a speaker alone in a storm, clinging to scraps of wreckage while icy winds and waves batter the cliffs. The storm seems to stand for inner turmoil. The speaker feels trapped, calling the situation a "hole" and "gallows", and keeps begging for their soul to be saved. Someone, or something, also pulls them back whenever they try to escape.

The mood swings like the weather. A brief pause of calm and peace gives way to the storm's return, and the speaker feels "lost / Yet warm," a strange mix that reflects confused emotions. Then the sweet singing of a siren offers relief, and the speaker feels their heart beat and believes they are being lifted away. But the voice stops, the heart sinks, and the speaker is left "shackled from inside." The closing repetition of "Save my soul" shows that nothing has been resolved. The poem ends in the same desperate place where it began, which makes the hope feel fragile and the ending quietly painful.

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