«hold me…» — Summary

hold me not these tools a shape is worked into and above all say you know it's just too damned beauti- -ful.

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Spoken in broken, hesitant fragments, this is a poem about wanting closeness and struggling to put it into words. The speaker begins with a plea, "hold me," then immediately pulls back: "not / these tools." It seems the speaker distrusts ordinary language, the "tools" that work a "shape" into something, as if describing a feeling might shape it wrongly or flatten it. What matters most, the speaker says, is that the listener simply "know."

The ending lands on a kind of surrender. "It's just / too damned / beauti- / -ful" is cut in half by the line break, so the word itself falters mid-breath. The casual "damned" makes the moment sound real and a little exasperated, like someone overwhelmed. The mood is tender, shy, and slightly breathless. Because the lines are so short and the pauses so frequent, we feel the speaker searching for words and failing, and the failure becomes the point: some things are too big for neat phrasing.

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