I. 8. 73 — Summary

Josephine ClareContemplative

walk on water skate on ice. what color ice? my skates are alfred johnson skates. PAT. AUG. 27. 1918 NO 1277137 CHICAGO USA NOT CONNECTED WITH NESTOR JOHNSON MFG CO. does ice mirror? it is day ice is silver metallic blue color of mirror of skates. lake's face we glide over used to mirror sky. did the lake look forward to freezing point? to when the liquid surface crusts? innocent enough it starts. water cooled turns heavy sinks warmer water surfaces. continuous cooling. watch the sun skid on ice. i am joking he never does detests slippery surface. it starts with a shiver continuous cooling goose pimples. for a second a certain expectant dullness of the surface then a thin skin forms like on milk cooling continuously. ice is less dense so floats its power lies in expansion. do you think skating a substitute for flying? empires of ice expand below. domain of the beautiful but terrible ice queen. palace walls of drifted ice windows of bitter wind a hundred halls ablaze by northern lights. gemini fly a lot in dreams as long as they are light. air is their element. at night ice is black even from above i guess i should know. we love to skate at night on a surface well lit.

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The speaker goes skating on a frozen lake and lets their thoughts drift as freely as the blades. The poem begins with the skates themselves, copying the patent stamp from the metal, then moves to questions: what color is ice, does it act like a mirror? From there it slides into a plain, almost scientific account of how a lake freezes, with cooling water sinking, a shiver, "goose pimples," and a thin skin forming like the one on milk.

Then the tone shifts. Skating becomes a kind of flying, and the ice turns into a fairy-tale realm of ice queens, drifted walls and northern lights. The mention of Gemini and air as their element suggests the speaker may be one, though that is an inference. The ending is quietly unsettling: ice at night is black, "even from above," and the speaker says "i guess i should know." The mood mixes playfulness, curiosity and a hint of darkness beneath the bright, well-lit surface.

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