Scars — Summary

The scars cover my body Not a single blank space left They keep ripping themselves open I scream for help But no one else can see them

The half empty bottle of water sits just an inch away No matter how far I reach, I am not close enough My throat is starting to fall apart The pieces lying scattered about me like I'm some sort of broken porcelain doll

I have tried my best here But my best isn't good enough for you You, who have taken things from me You, who took the thoughts from my mind And the words from my mouth

Now I find myself, dehydrated and bleeding, waiting for you You took and yet I still expect you to give Oh god, I have tried my best to please you To crawl on my hands and knees and convince you

But all it got me were more scars, a half empty bottle of water, and a century of silence

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Brooklynn's poem is about pain that nobody else can see, and about the exhaustion of trying to win approval from someone who only takes. The speaker is covered in scars that keep reopening, yet her cries for help go unnoticed. The "you" in the poem is never named, so we're left to guess who it is. Whoever it is, they have taken her thoughts and her words, leaving her without a voice.

The images are all about lack. A half empty bottle of water sits just out of reach, and her throat is falling apart, like a broken porcelain doll. She keeps trying, even crawling on her hands and knees, but it's never enough.

The mood is desperate, bleak, and worn down. The last line hits hardest: all her effort earns her more scars, the same unreachable water, and "a century of silence." The poem leaves us with a sense of loneliness that feels endless.

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