Runaway Children — Summary

they were filled to the brim by the only good thing in their life they then overflowed creeping out windows in the dead of the raging night they breathed in the vapour relief relapsing amongst the towering trees the corner of metal houses were the closest thing to a hug the sirens went around posters crinkled in the wind "have you seen this broken child?" the screams still ring in their pierced ears now silenced by the peace of being away from it all

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Told from the outside, almost like a news report, the poem follows children who slip away from a painful home in the middle of the night. The opening image is odd and striking: they are "filled to the brim" by "the only good thing in their life," then "overflow," as if their hope or need to leave simply spills over. The poem never says what that good thing is, and that mystery makes it feel more fragile.

Out in the trees, the children find a rough kind of comfort. Metal houses are "the closest thing to a hug," a line that shows how little tenderness they have known. Meanwhile the sirens and the posters asking "have you seen this broken child?" show how the adult world sees them: as damaged and lost, not as people running from harm. The ending is quiet. The screams they remember are "silenced by the peace / of being away from it all." The mood is bleak but strangely calm, with relief tangled up with sadness and danger.

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