dont. — Poem analysis

don't look back. don't do this. don't do that. don't be you. don't frown. all things that flood my mind. also words i've heard along the line. i say them in attempt to hide what's actually going on inside you don't know what's happening in your daily life. you wake up, almost robotically doing what you have to what you've always done. you make mistakes. but you're human. another thing i'll tell myself. so i'll wake up again and live for something other than myself. though i feel i'd make a pretty sunset

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Five lines in a row begin with "don't," and by the third the word already sounds worn out. "don't look back. / don't do this. / don't do that." The commands start vague, almost comic, with a this and a that that could mean anything. Then they swell into something enormous: "don't be you." One line later comes "don't frown," a tiny instruction landing right after the huge one. That drop from identity to facial expression feels true to life, because ordinary pressure piles posture, mood and personality into one heap. The speaker names the heap: "all things that flood my mind." The flood image suggests these orders arrive faster than they can be sorted. They are also "words i've heard along the line," so the voice policing the speaker is secondhand, collected from other people over time.

The poem's one clean rhyme arrives at the moment of concealment: "i say them in attempt to hide / what's actually going on inside." Hide and inside chime neatly, a tidy sound wrapped around something untidy. The slightly off grammar of "in attempt" (rather than "in an attempt") keeps the voice casual and spoken, not polished. The logic is simple and sad. Reciting rules is easier than saying what you feel, so the don'ts work as a smokescreen. The poem never says what is "going on inside," and that absence is the point. Even the title, "dont.," drops the apostrophe the body keeps, as if the word has been clipped down to something blunt and final.

Then the pronoun changes. "you don't know what's happening in your daily life. / you wake up, almost robotically / doing what you have to / what you've always done." Addressing themselves as "you," the speaker treats their own life like a stranger's, in the same instructing voice as the don'ts, only flatter. The form mimics the routine it describes. The lines lose their full stops and run together, and "robotically" is the longest, most mechanical word in the poem. The small hedge "almost" matters, though. The speaker is not quite a machine, and something is still noticing.

The next lines are short and plain: "you make mistakes. / but you're human." This is meant to be kind, but the poem undercuts it at once with "another thing i'll tell myself." Reassurance is filed with the prohibitions as one more line from a repertoire, repeated by rote. This is the poem's central idea. Whether harsh or gentle, the voices in the speaker's head are scripts, and it is hard to tell which words are really theirs.

The ending turns on small words. "so i'll wake up again" echoes the earlier "you wake up," but now the act sounds like a decision, not a reflex, and the "so" makes it a conclusion drawn from "you're human." Yet "live for something other than myself" is double-edged. It could mean finding a purpose beyond the self, or it could hint that the self alone feels like too little reason to go on. Then comes "though i feel i'd make a pretty sunset," where "though" turns the whole sentence against what came before. A sunset is beautiful, but it is also an ending. Judging by the imagery, the line can be read as a wish to be seen as worthwhile, and also as a quiet, darker thought about disappearing. The poem does not choose between these readings. It is also the only sentence that stops without a full stop, in a poem full of them. A reader who recognises these feelings in themselves should take them seriously and talk to someone they trust.

The poem is significant for how plainly it captures something many readers know: the inner critic is made of borrowed voices, and even self-comfort can feel borrowed. The lowercase letters, short lines and everyday vocabulary make that feeling hard to dismiss as drama. The poem hides nothing in ornament, only in the don'ts, and then lets one odd, lovely image slip through.

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