Beauty Defined — Summary

The fine golden hair, White shiny teeth, Hourglass figure, The definition of beauty, With eyes as blue as the sky, Full, luscious lips, Strong legs like that of an athlete, The definition of beauty, Silence fills the room as she enters, Heads turn instantly, Mouths agape, The definition of beauty, With all attention on her, She opens her mouth, Stumbles over her words, In a cringe-inducing sound, She lays in bed that night, Her face firmly implanted on the pillow, A sadness comes upon her, As eyes are not on her, A woman wakes up the next morning, Appearing pasty and obese, Preparing to educate our children, The definition of beauty, Words emanate smoothly from her mouth, Tending to our children’s needs, Exuding intelligence, confidence and dedication, The definition of beauty.

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Craig Rozniecki's poem sets two ideas of beauty side by side and asks which one deserves the word. The first woman has every feature people usually praise: golden hair, blue eyes, an athlete's legs. The refrain "the definition of beauty" repeats like a checklist. Heads turn when she enters, but the moment she speaks, she stumbles, and the spell breaks. That night she lies facedown in bed, sad because no one is looking at her anymore. Her beauty, the poem suggests, depends entirely on being watched.

Then the poem turns. A second woman wakes up "pasty and obese," and the speaker describes her in blunt, unflattering terms. Yet she teaches children with smooth words, intelligence, confidence and dedication, and the refrain returns, now meaning something different. The tone is quietly pointed rather than angry. By repeating the same phrase for both women, the speaker invites us to question the shallow standard we usually apply, and to see beauty in what someone does and gives to others.

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