Deafening Sigh-lence — Summary

My ears are rattled, Pained by the volume, Plugs to prevent damage, The silence is deafening, Not a sound can be heard, Not a word nor a laugh, Left for me to interpret, The silence is deafening, Not a thought is uttered, Not an emotion expressed, No tone of voice, The silence is deafening, I look you straight in the eyes, Express how I feel, No reaction is given, The silence is deafening, Walking away as if you were never there, Seemingly speechless at my admission, Awkwardness fills the air, The silence is deafening, I release a deep, heavy sigh, The lone audible sound, Speechless in response, As my head sinks down, Treating me as if I don’t exist, No care of my thoughts or feelings, The plugs now of no aid, Your silence is deafening.

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The speaker has told someone how they feel, and the reply is nothing at all. No words, no laugh, no change in tone, not even a flicker of reaction. The poem builds around the repeated line "The silence is deafening," which works like a drumbeat. Each time it returns, the quiet feels heavier, and the speaker's hurt grows with it.

The title's pun on "sigh-lence" points to the one sound in the poem: the speaker's own deep sigh. Early on, the speaker mentions ear plugs, as if to block out noise, but the idea turns bitter by the end. The plugs are "of no aid" because this isn't ordinary noise. It is the pain of being ignored. The other person walks away "as if you were never there," and the speaker is left feeling invisible, as though their thoughts and feelings don't matter. The mood is awkward, lonely, and quietly crushing, and the final switch from "The" to "Your" silence turns it into a direct accusation.

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