When I See Your Face… — Summary

My eyes light up, A smile is instant, I bounce with excitement, When I see your face, In a crowded room, It’s all that I see, My pulse begins to quicken, When I see your face, Thoughts enter my mind, Romantic images then displayed, In a dream-like trance, When I see your face, Confusion dominates my ponderings, As a confrontation is made, Uncertain of what to feel, When I see your face, Ripping the heart from my chest, Stomping upon it as it palpitates, An agonizing pain is felt, When I see your face, In a near empty room, With only you and I present, Feeling queasy and saddened, When I see your face, Whenever you are near, Or far away, Tears fill my eyes, When I see your face.

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Every stanza of Craig Rozniecki's poem ends with the same line, "When I see your face," but the feeling that comes before it keeps changing. The poem opens with pure delight: bright eyes, an instant smile, a racing pulse, and a person who stands out in a crowded room. Then daydreams of romance creep in, followed by confusion and uncertainty about what the speaker should feel.

After that, the mood turns dark. The speaker describes having their heart ripped out and stomped on, which is a violent way of saying how much it hurts. Even a quiet, nearly empty room with only the two of them doesn't help; the speaker feels queasy and sad. By the end, tears come whether the person is near or far away.

The repeated line works like a trigger, and the same sight produces very different reactions. The poem suggests unrequited or painful love, where happiness and heartache are tangled together. The mood slides from excitement to sorrow.

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