The Tree — Poem analysis

Balachandran VTrivandrum, 06-10-2010Sad

Above, the sky was a bright blue Clouds, white, swum lazily Sun shone bright Breeze blew gentle.

Atop the tree, on the highest branch A new leaf, slender and green Soaked in the sun and danced in the air. Other leaves wished how they could be At the top, at the very top.

Humming happily to itself, the leaf, Humming happily to itself Nothing above me But the empty, vast sky!

Trembling in glee, the flower buds Blushed, Dreaming of the bees And the fruits they will bear.

The branches huddled, Gravely discussing the season The weather, how stronger and longer They should grow; They had their targets to meet.

The bark of the trunk, bit worried Wondered how to tackle The rise in termites The whims of the woodpeckers And the nuisance of squirrels Nibbling the bark just for fun.

Beneath the soil Matters had taken a worse turn The roots were in confusion And fear Of the fickle rains And the hard rocks deeper.

Birds flew, wind blew Sun set and the moon rose.

In the dark As the owl hooted As bats erupted in and out The tree sighed For it knew It was its last night.

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Everyone in Balachandran V's "The Tree" is busy, and nobody sees what is coming. The poem spends most of its length inside a tree's body, listening to each part fret about its own concerns, and then ends with one short, quiet line that makes all that fretting look very small. Its central idea is that we get absorbed in our own ambitions and anxieties while a larger ending waits unnoticed.

The poem is built like a slow journey down the tree. It opens on a perfect morning: "the sky was a bright blue," clouds "swum lazily," a breeze "gentle." Then the camera drops to the highest branch and moves downward through leaf, buds, branches, bark and finally roots, each with its own mood. The higher the part, the lighter the feeling. The new leaf hums happily, the buds blush, and the branches grow businesslike. By the time we reach the roots, "confusion / And fear" have taken over. The poem seems to suggest that those at the top enjoy the sun while those below carry the worry, though that is an inference from the imagery, not something it says outright.

Personification does most of the work, and much of it is funny. The leaf's boast, "Nothing above me / But the empty, vast sky!", is the cheerful pride of someone who has just reached the top, and the repeated line "Humming happily to itself" makes it sound almost like a child's song. The other leaves "wished how they could be / At the top," which is a small portrait of envy. The flower buds tremble "in glee" and dream of bees and fruit, so their whole future is already planned. The branches are the most human of all. They huddle "gravely," discuss the season and decide how much "stronger and longer" they should grow, because "they had their targets to meet." That phrase belongs in an office, not a forest, and the poem uses it to poke gentle fun at how we turn even growing into a performance review.

The worries get more specific lower down. The bark frets about termites, woodpeckers and "the nuisance of squirrels / Nibbling the bark just for fun." The roots fear "the fickle rains / And the hard rocks deeper." The poem is careful about what these fears are. Each is a slow, ordinary, natural threat of the kind a tree could imagine and prepare for. None of them is what actually arrives.

The form supports this. The poem is free verse with no regular rhythm, and its lines run long or short as a thought requires, which gives it the loose feel of someone telling a story aloud. Rhyme is almost absent, so the one pairing that stands out is "Birds flew, wind blew." It lands like a line from a lullaby, and it echoes the "Breeze blew gentle" of the opening. The world keeps to its routine, with the sun setting and the moon rising, and that calm sequence is what makes the turn so effective.

That turn comes at night. The vocabulary changes: the owl "hooted," bats "erupted in and out," and "erupted" is a far more violent verb than anything used in daylight. Then the sentences shrink to almost nothing: "The tree sighed / For it knew / It was its last night." The words are plain and mostly one syllable, and the sigh is the first moment the tree speaks as a whole rather than as its parts. The leaf, buds, branches, bark and roots never mention this ending, but the whole tree knows it. The poem also never says why the night is the last. Whether the cause is age, storm or an axe is left to the reader, and that silence makes the ending feel more final.

The poem's significance lies in this contrast between fussing and finality. It works like a small fable, with a single day standing in for a whole life, and it leaves us wondering which of our own targets and rivalries will matter when our last night comes. It does this without a lecture. It only lets the tree sigh, and the reader draws the conclusion.

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