In the Open — Summary

Balachandran V13.1.2017Contemplative

A deep sigh escapes my lips, as in the morning I empty a full bladder, leaning to the coconut palm. Nothing more pleasurable than to empty oneself Of urine and from one’s mind, yesterday’s thoughts.

I blush; a Black Drongo on the wires turns Its head to look at me; a Magpie Robin trills a song. The Kingfisher, hops down on a branch Above my head and shakes his, as if in disapproval.

High above, against the darkening sky The dragonflies swarm and circle Bracing for the long journey ahead. When do I, begin mine?

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The poem begins with something humble and a little embarrassing: the speaker relieving himself against a coconut palm in the morning. He treats it as a real pleasure, a double emptying in which the body lets go of urine and the mind lets go of "yesterday's thoughts." The tone is light and a bit self-mocking.

Then the birds arrive. A drongo turns to look, a robin sings, and a kingfisher seems to shake its head in disapproval. The speaker blushes, as if caught by an audience, which makes the scene gently funny and shows how closely he feels part of the natural world around him.

The last stanza shifts. Dragonflies circle against a darkening sky, "bracing for the long journey ahead." The speaker, still in the open, asks when he will begin his own. The mood turns quiet and thoughtful, and the humour gives way to a wistful sense that he is still waiting, or unsure, about what comes next.

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