Luxury lives — Poem analysis

bknrd1712Contemplative

Do you ever think about it? About our luxury lives?

Do you ever think about the costs? About the costs of our luxury lives?

Do you ever want to change it? Change your way of life?

I don't think we ever think nor want to change

Change the way of our luxury lives

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Nobody enjoys being asked whether they are living too well, and "Luxury lives" seems to know it. It asks anyway, three times, and then does something braver than most poems of this kind: it answers on everyone's behalf, the speaker's included. Nothing is known here about who wrote it beyond the signature bknrd1712, so the text has to carry everything. It carries a good deal.

The poem is built from three pairs of lines, each a question followed by a narrowing echo. "Do you ever think about it? / About our luxury lives?" The vague "it" is pinned down by the second line, and the pattern repeats with "costs" and then "change." The three steps read like the stages of a conscience: noticing, counting, acting. Each is harder to answer yes to than the one before. Anyone can admit to thinking occasionally. Admitting to wanting a different life is much more uncomfortable.

The pronouns are worth watching. The poem begins with "you" but slips in "our" at once, so the reader is addressed and implicated in the same breath. By the third question the phrase has become "your way of life," a pointed finger. The phrase is also noticeably softer: "luxury" has vanished and "way of life" has taken its place. Judging by the poem's own logic, this is the comfortable name we give ourselves, and "luxury" is the blunter one the poem keeps returning to. Then comes the answer, and the speaker steps in as "I" and groups everyone as "we." The accuser turns out to be one of the accused.

That answer is the poem's longest line: "I don't think we ever think nor want to change." The line contains a small trap. The speaker says "I don't think," and the line goes on to say that we don't think. The speaker is therefore thinking about not thinking, which is exactly the habit the poem accuses us of lacking. The verdict is bleak, but the one delivering it plainly hasn't given up thinking. The grammar also sags a little. "Nor" arrives without the usual "neither" to balance it, and the sentence trails off with no punctuation, like a shrug put into words. The earlier questions are short and brisk, almost chanted. The answer is slow and heavy and ends flat, with no question mark to lift it.

The last line stands alone: "Change the way of our luxury lives." Read as the end of the previous sentence, it simply completes the thought ("…to change / the way of our luxury lives"). But the line break lets "Change" work as a command, so the poem's final word of advice hides inside its final word of resignation. The poem doesn't settle between the two readings, and that uncertainty may be its most honest move. It closes on the phrase it opened with, so the structure itself becomes a loop. The questions keep circling, and nothing breaks the circle.

The poem has no rhyme and almost no imagery in the usual sense. There is no smoke, no sea, no price tag, only plain, mostly one-syllable words and the steady repetition of "Do you ever," "about," and "change." That bareness seems deliberate. "Costs" is never itemised, so it could mean money, the environment, other people's labour, or something more private such as the loss of attention or contentment. Leaving the word open makes each reader fill it with their own bill. Even the title does double duty: "Luxury lives" can be a noun phrase, many comfortable lives, or a short sentence in which luxury itself is alive and well. The soft, alliterating l-sounds make the phrase pleasant to say, which is part of the temptation the poem describes.

What gives the poem weight is that its form acts out its subject. It asks the same questions over and over and gets no reply, and that is how a guilty thought behaves in an ordinary comfortable life: it surfaces, circles, and fades. The poem's honesty lies in refusing to stand outside the problem and lecture. It ends with a question it can't quite answer, and leaves the reader holding it.

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