BREATHE — Summary

I said "Okay." Thought I wanted attentions, Your time, Your cuddles, Your hugs, Your calls, Your voices, Your texts, Your words, Your I love you.

I'm okay.

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A person says "Okay," and then the poem lists everything that word may be covering up. The speaker admits they "thought" they wanted attention, and the list that follows is tender and specific: time, cuddles, hugs, calls, voices, texts, words, and finally "Your I love you." Each item is short and sits on its own line, so the list feels like someone counting what they miss, one small thing at a time.

The ending is only three words: "I'm okay." After so much longing, it reads as unconvincing. The speaker may be trying to persuade themselves, or to look fine in front of someone else. The poem doesn't say what happened between these two people, so we can only judge by the tone, which suggests a loss or a distance.

The mood is quiet, sad, and restrained. The title, "Breathe," feels like the speaker's way of steadying themselves while holding back what they really feel.

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