MY SILENCE — Summary

The winter air cold touches my skin The road with no crowded people The birds flying away

The red roses displayed And when I touch my finger bleed So I drop my blood in the water

I see the Christmas lights sparkle The branches with snows on My hair flaws when the wind breezes

I sit on a bench alone I started to write my love poems My silence...

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A quiet winter scene slowly turns into a portrait of loneliness. The speaker walks through cold air and an almost empty road, watching birds fly away and Christmas lights sparkle on snowy branches. Everything looks pretty, but nothing is warm or close. Even the red roses, which usually suggest love, hurt: when the speaker touches them, a finger bleeds, and the blood is dropped into water. That small moment hints that love and pain are tangled together for this person.

By the end, the speaker sits alone on a bench and begins writing love poems. The poem doesn't say who they are for, so the feeling stays open. It could be longing for someone absent, or a wish for connection that hasn't been met. The final words, "My silence...", trail off and also give the poem its title. The mood is soft, lonely, and wistful. The speaker doesn't shout their sadness; they turn it into quiet writing, and the poem itself becomes that act.

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