I Was Eight — Summary

in the dead of night under a black-blue-purple sky she ripped me away from my home the only thing i ever knew she smothered me with her shirt to stop the cries bound my hands to end my desperate scratches held up that ragged rabbit i kept beside my bed and told me i was safe that she was my hero no matter what anyone else said

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Told from the point of view of a child, this poem describes being taken from home in the middle of the night. The speaker, only eight, is smothered, bound and carried off by a woman who insists she is a hero. The details are frightening: the muffled cries, the tied hands, the scratching that comes from pure panic. Yet the woman also holds up a ragged rabbit, a small, tender gesture that sits strangely beside the force she uses.

The speaker's feelings seem to be terror and confusion. Home was "the only thing i ever knew," so losing it means losing everything familiar. The poem never says who the woman is or whether she was right, and that silence is part of its power. We only get the child's memory of it. The last lines, "no matter what anyone else said," hint at a disagreement over who the hero really was. The mood is tense, haunting and unsettled, as if the night still hasn't ended for the speaker.

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