Fight — Summary

touch me again or say another word i dare you because the moment i feel threatened i will rip your throat out with my teeth even if there was no threat at all

Show the whole poemHide the poem

Learn Poems app

Try the Learn Poems app

Everything from the website trainer, and more: new exercises, voice recording and sharing, reminders, quick review.

The speaker here is issuing a threat, but the last line changes what kind of threat it is. At first it sounds like plain aggression: don't touch me, don't speak, or I'll tear your throat out. The language is blunt and violent, with no softening and almost no punctuation to slow it down.

Then comes the twist: the speaker will attack "even if there was no threat at all." That admission suggests the danger isn't really out there. It's in how the speaker feels. Someone who reacts to harmless moments as if they were attacks is probably living in a constant state of alert, and the poem hints that this defensiveness has become automatic, maybe even beyond the speaker's control.

The mood is tense and raw, a little frightening, but also oddly vulnerable. The title, "Ancient Artifact," may point to an old, instinctive reflex, something primal left over from earlier times. The anger reads as armor, and the fear underneath it is what the poem quietly reveals.

Read also

More by Ancient Artifact

All poems
AngryAncient Artifact

Puppeteer

they stripped me of everything so now i can't help but pull the strings of others
SadAncient Artifact

Voices

my heart has conversations with you every day holding on for what could have been even as this silence fills the space between us
SadAncient Artifact

An Un-Swung Axe

it's not your fault lindo that i flinch every time you suddenly turn around or that my hands shake every time i try to touch your face or that i sob brokenly every time i can't bring myself to do it.