Or Flight — Summary

face-down i laid on that dusty carpet acutely aware of the bed above me mattress heavy enough to crush my lungs if it fell and your head knocking against the battered walls thump thump thump because instinct screams at you to run and hide to listen to every fucking heartbeat of the enemy when violence lurks nearby

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The speaker lies face-down on a dusty carpet beneath a bed, and the poem reads like a memory of hiding from danger. The details are small and physical: the dust, the heavy mattress that could crush their lungs, the battered walls. Someone else is there too. "Your head knocking against the battered walls" suggests another person, perhaps frightened or in distress, and the repeated "thump / thump / thump" works like a heartbeat or a countdown.

The last lines explain the scene. Instinct "screams" at us to run and hide, and to listen to "every fucking heartbeat of the enemy." The swearing feels raw and unfiltered, as if fear has stripped away politeness. The title and its subtitle, "Or Flight," point to the fight-or-flight response, though here the speaker can only freeze and wait. The poem never says who the enemy is or what the violence is, and that vagueness adds to the mood. It feels tense, claustrophobic and hushed, with every sound magnified.

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