«Tiny the child…» — Summary

Andrew HamlinContemplative

Tiny the child, sunscreen smooth on his cheeks like clown white

Grateful, at last, at (farting my way through Thursday) …enforced hermitude

Like a taffy pull, bumblebee clung to one side of the clover

How forlorn, the truck’s rumble without the truck

Imagination disconnected, I tune in to the night

Profundities, the faintest of echoes… concrete garage

Too tired to care whether moths go condo in that damn bathroom

Chilly July… fresh-shaven cheeks against my robe’s collar

The dog finished its days, panting in the hay

They’re cheering for…what… being alive after all? (I stay upstairs)

Robert De Niro lets everything ride on an eyelid twitch

As the dog is in the early morn, so too my own panting

Refrigerator cools, what I want it to– Yet I insist, more!

No breeze– door one-quarter open… two sandals

Twin flies over chicken Caesar– deaf to argument

Crows have opinions– fine, but must they menace fragile music?

The woodman’s hat catches only one falling star

Today only, black man on a black bike… northward

Afraid to put on Bill Evans… so many depths

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Andrew Hamlin's sequence reads like a notebook of tiny observations, each one a short haiku-like snapshot. A child with sunscreen on his cheeks, a bumblebee clinging to clover, a truck's rumble with no truck: the speaker notices small things and lets them stand without explanation. Humor sits next to loneliness. He jokes about farting through Thursday and about moths moving into the bathroom, yet he also admits to "enforced hermitude" and stays upstairs while others cheer.

The mood is wry, tired, and quietly melancholy. The dog "finished its days" and the speaker later hears his own panting in that image, which suggests he is thinking about aging and endings. The ending is the most telling: he is "afraid to put on Bill Evans" because there are "so many depths." Judging by the rest of the poem, he keeps life light and surface-level on purpose, since deeper feeling might be too much. The jokes and small details work as a way of coping.

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