Haiku 66 — Summary

Andrew HamlinContemplative

Summer sets… stuffed red wagon left at the curb

Summer sets… toddlers churn through the wading pool

Summer sets… sweat on my left wrist dries faster than my right

Summer sets… fire truck howls like a hollow tooth

From a sunken throne, potentate breathes in bubbles

Reticence fouled by the waters of love… blood incidental

Truck horn, punctuation for no sentence

Summer sets… I clamp suspenders to my long pants

Nobody knows… my nail fungus detente

Summer sets… sunburned earlobes scratch the pillow

Summer sets… little boy bows to landing ducks

…no longer time enough left to watch all the films he wants

Summer sets… my watch band, cracked ancient

Summer sets… dog’s ball rolls alone

Summer sets… ball-peen hammer wedged in the chicken coop

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Andrew Hamlin strings together a run of tiny snapshots, many of them opening with the refrain "Summer sets…". The word "sets" works two ways: the sun going down, and a season slipping toward its close. Around that refrain come ordinary details: a stuffed wagon left at the curb, toddlers churning a wading pool, a sunburned earlobe scratching the pillow, a dog's ball rolling with no one to chase it.

The speaker seems wry and a little self-mocking, noting sweaty wrists, nail fungus and suspenders clamped to long pants. Yet an undertone of loneliness and passing time runs underneath. The line about having "no longer time enough left to watch all the films he wants" and the cracked watch band suggest awareness of aging. The abandoned ball and the fire truck's howl sharpen that feeling.

The mood is quiet, funny and wistful, like an evening when the heat fades and you notice small things you'd usually miss.

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