A saviour — Summary

One, maybe two, Hands moving themselves, I'll do a few.

A crimson trail, Of lines inflicted, By my past.

A long sleeved jumper, Averted eyes, False smiles.

A mistake, A forgotten memory, Shouldn't roam.

I tell myself, Repeatedly, I'm just alone.

Don't talk, No tears, Stay away from me.

What if you saw, The truth that's hidden, Under my sleeve?

I'm sorry, To the people, Who actually mind.

I pushed you away, Retreating behind, A perfect mask.

You take it off, Holding my hand, Inspecting my lies.

The wounds heal, Scars disappear, In your bright light.

Stop cutting. Hell's sake.

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Written in short, clipped lines, the poem is about self-harm and the secrecy that surrounds it. The speaker describes cutting, "a crimson trail" left by their past, and the careful ways they hide it: long sleeves, averted eyes, false smiles. They keep telling themselves they're "just alone," as if that explains everything, while pushing people away with "Don't talk, no tears, stay away from me."

The mood is guarded and heavy, but it shifts. Midway, the speaker wonders what would happen if someone saw the truth, and apologises to those who "actually mind," which hints at guilt and doubt about whether anyone cares. Then the poem imagines being seen: a person takes off the mask, holds their hand, and the wounds and scars fade in "your bright light." The blunt last line, "Stop cutting. Hell's sake," reads like the speaker scolding themselves, or perhaps a plea from someone who cares. It ends abruptly, raw and unresolved, with a flicker of hope.

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