Adieu — Poem analysis

Balachandran VKottayam 28.09.2005Sad

Let us then, do not lie Though we lie next to each. Let us then, do not touch If our hearts so belie. Let us then, do not kiss Bereft of warmth are our lips. Let not our eyes look at us Blinds are drawn, the windows dark. Let us then, do not let love Fall into a habit like brushing the teeth. Scatter the past to the rising wind Like leaves fluttering in the Fall. Let us then, not pretend to love No reprimand for not being in love. Life is a journey not bound on leash, Let us, my love, now let us leave.

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Most farewell poems mourn. "Adieu" argues instead that the kindest thing two people can do is stop pretending. The speaker turns to a partner lying close by and proposes, step by step, that they give up every gesture that has gone hollow: touching, kissing, even looking. Once those are gone, the only honest act left is to go. The central idea is that love performed out of habit betrays the relationship more deeply than an open ending does. The poem is signed with a place and date, Kottayam, 28.09.2005, and it needs nothing more than that.

The first two lines hold the whole situation in a pun. "Let us then, do not lie / Though we lie next to each." The same word means both telling falsehoods and lying in bed, so physical closeness becomes a cover for emotional distance. The second line also stops at "each", not "each other". Whether intended or not, the missing "other" fits: it leaves two separate people side by side.

The poem is built almost entirely from refusals. Do not touch, do not kiss, do not pretend. The repeated "Let us then" gives these refusals a formal, negotiated tone, like terms agreed by two people who are tired but still courteous. The grammar is slightly unusual. "Let us then, do not lie" blends a polite proposal with a flat command. That mixture suits a speaker trying to be gentle and firm at once.

The images follow the feeling as it cools. Lips are "bereft of warmth". Then comes the strangest line: "Let not our eyes look at us." The couple cannot bear to see themselves. The next line extends the old idea of eyes as windows: "Blinds are drawn, the windows dark." The relationship becomes a house shut up for the night, and "Blinds" quietly suggests blindness too.

The boldest image is deliberately unromantic: love must not "Fall into a habit like brushing the teeth." Teeth-brushing is something done twice a day, without feeling, to keep things in order, and the comparison deflates the language of romance. It is also the longest line in the poem, which makes the sentence itself seem to drag like a routine. The word "Fall" then returns two lines later as the season: the past is to be scattered "to the rising wind / Like leaves fluttering in the Fall." Love's decline and autumn's leaf-fall share a word, which links the personal and the natural. The leaves also make the ending gentle. Nothing is burned or buried, and "rising" suggests a wind that is starting something rather than only ending it.

The sound is loose and conversational, with no fixed metre. The opening is the most patterned, with "lie" and "belie" framing the slant pair "each" and "touch", which share their final consonant sound. Later pairs such as "kiss"/"lips" and "leash"/"leave" are only partial echoes. Lines 13 and 14 end on "love" and "love", a repeated word where a rhyme might be. One could hear this as the sound of having nothing new to say, which is the poem's point.

The close is where the poem turns. "No reprimand for not being in love" removes blame, so nobody is the villain. Then a familiar saying, "Life is a journey", is sharpened by one word: a journey "not bound on leash". A relationship held together by obligation becomes a lead on a collar. The last line, "Let us, my love, now let us leave", brings in the poem's only endearment just as the couple parts. The tenderness has not vanished, and leaving is presented as its final expression. The title fits this. "Adieu", from the French, literally "to God", is heavier than "goodbye" and suggests a parting not meant to be undone.

The poem matters for how plainly it handles an experience that is usually dramatised. There are no tears, no accusations and no grand metaphors, only a toothbrush, a window blind and a few leaves. Its idea is simple and uncomfortable: honesty can be a form of love, and staying can be the lie.

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