Adieu — Summary

Balachandran VKottayam 28.09.2005Sad

Let us then, do not lie Though we lie next to each. Let us then, do not touch If our hearts so belie. Let us then, do not kiss Bereft of warmth are our lips. Let not our eyes look at us Blinds are drawn, the windows dark. Let us then, do not let love Fall into a habit like brushing the teeth. Scatter the past to the rising wind Like leaves fluttering in the Fall. Let us then, not pretend to love No reprimand for not being in love. Life is a journey not bound on leash, Let us, my love, now let us leave.

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The speaker is talking to a lover and asking for an honest end to a relationship that has gone empty. The two still share a bed, but the poem insists that lying next to each other has turned into lying to each other. Touching and kissing feel false when the heart isn't in them, and the lips have lost their warmth. The line about windows with blinds drawn suggests two people who can no longer really see one another.

The most striking image is love becoming "a habit like brushing the teeth," something done daily without feeling. The speaker would rather scatter the past like autumn leaves than keep up the pretence. The tone is quiet and tired rather than angry. There is no blame, since "no reprimand for not being in love." The final line, "let us leave," is gentle, almost tender. The mood is sad but calm, with a sense of relief in finally telling the truth.

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