With You — Summary

Can I tell you something? You mean the world to me, You're never off my mind, I love you for everything you let me know, And everything I'm yet to ask. I love how you look when I speak, How you hear the words I say, How you think and then respond, How you treat me like an equal. I love how you joke with me, You talk with, not to me, You answer no matter how strange- I ask a lot of strange- I want to meet your family, Want you to meet mine, Want to see you eating dinner In the seat right next to mine. I want to hold, Talk, Listen to you. I want to read, Joke, I want to be with you. Because those three words, The ones I'm scared to say, They come to mind when I think of you, Which is all and every day.

I want to love you. I do. I love you. I want you to love me I hope you do. I want to do stuff- But I want to do it With you.

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In "With You," the speaker is working up the nerve to tell someone they love them. The poem opens with a shy question, "Can I tell you something?", and then circles the confession, listing everything they admire: the way this person listens, answers even strange questions, and treats the speaker as an equal. Ordinary wishes pile up too, like meeting each other's families or sharing a dinner table.

The key moment comes when the speaker admits that "those three words" are scary to say. They hold back, but the poem makes the feeling obvious anyway. Near the end, the lines get shorter and more direct, moving from "I want to love you" to "I do. I love you," as if the courage finally arrives. The final plea, "I hope you do," leaves things open.

The mood is warm, nervous and sincere. The plain, repetitive language, with so many lines beginning "I love" or "I want," feels like someone speaking honestly and a little awkwardly, which suits a first confession.

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