The Hollow (20) — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

one katydid this late in the season

texting my wife

migrant flycatcher

swiping its beak back and forth on a bare branch

a plastic toy football unearthed by the summer floods

all the stream’s voices

rain-softened ground

even the gravel road has a bit of give

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Instead of telling one story, the poem gathers a handful of quiet moments from the woods, each set down in a few plain lines. A lone katydid is still singing late in the year, and its sound is likened to texting, as if the insect were sending a message home. A migrant flycatcher wipes its beak on a branch. A plastic toy football turns up in the dirt after summer floods. The stream seems to carry many voices at once, and the ground is soft enough after rain that even a gravel road gives a little underfoot.

The speaker mostly watches and listens, and the feeling is attentive and gently wistful. Everything points to the year winding down: late insects, birds passing through, flood leftovers, damp earth. The toy football hints at human life touching this place, but the poem doesn't comment on it. The mood is calm and unhurried, and it asks us to notice small things and let them add up.

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