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Dave BontaContemplative

In the news, there’s a report that COVID-19 antibodies might not persist for more than a few weeks, and therefore that we can expect no herd immunity. Thinking about this, I barely hear the black-and-white warbler wheezing or the wood-pewee’s melancholy melisma. But then, from around the bend, a deer comes bounding straight towards me, doubtless trying to escape her nimbus of flies. I freeze. She stops 50 feet away and stares, moving her head from side to side for a better view. Human, or a tall stump? She makes up her mind to step warily around me. And I am a stump. I barely remember having my head in the clouds.

whose road is this the tree snake’s rootless flow

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The speaker is out walking, but their mind is stuck on a news report: COVID-19 antibodies may fade within weeks, so herd immunity looks unlikely. Worry dulls the senses, and the birdsong, which the speaker clearly knows well, barely registers. Then a deer comes bounding around the bend, trying to shake off the flies around her. The speaker freezes. The deer stops, tilts her head, and seems to weigh up what she's seeing: a person or a tall stump? She decides on stump and steps carefully around.

The moment pulls the speaker out of abstract fear and back into the physical world. Being mistaken for a stump is quietly humbling, and slightly funny. The mood is calm, observant, and a little wry. The closing short verse asks "whose road is this" and pictures a tree snake's "rootless flow," which suggests that the path belongs to the animals as much as to us. It leaves a feeling of ease with being a small part of the landscape.

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