The starving artist casts a wide net — Poem analysis

Dave BontaCheerful

At home looking at an eel that my wife bought, I cried for our dinner that was all I.

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The fishing is already finished before the poem begins. The title introduces a "starving artist" who "casts a wide net," a stock image of someone scattering ambitions in every direction and hoping something turns up. The four lines underneath show what the net brings in: an eel bought by somebody else, and a sentence that can't even finish itself. The poem lives in the gap between that grand title and the small kitchen scene.

The setting is deliberately flat. "At home looking at an eel" gives us no catching, cooking or hunting, only looking. The speaker is passive, and the only act of provisioning belongs to the wife, in the short, practical clause "that my wife bought." So the artist who casts the wide net turns out to be the one watching while someone else puts food on the table. An eel is also a good thing to be caught staring at. It is awkward, slippery and faintly comic, and the poem doesn't say whether it is alive. Judging by the way the title plays with fishing, we might read it as a stand-in for everything the artist can't quite grasp, but the poem never insists on this. The eel stays a plain, slightly ridiculous object, and that restraint keeps the humor intact.

The central moment is "I cried for our dinner," where the verb works two ways. To cry *for* something can mean to weep over it, perhaps out of pity for the eel or for the household's thin circumstances. It can also mean to demand it, the way a hungry baby cries for food. Both meanings fit, and together they make a grown man sound helpless, sorrowful and a little spoiled. The word "our" matters too. The dinner is shared, which pulls the wife's presence back into the line and makes the hunger a household problem, not just a private pose.

Then comes the ending: "that was all I." The grammar sets up an expectation. After "all I" we want a verb such as *could do*, *had* or *managed*. The line stops instead, and the sentence runs out like the budget it describes. There are several ways to take this. Crying was all the speaker did. Or the starving artist is, in the end, nothing but an "I," an ego with no income, no catch and no dinner of his own making. The poem also closes on the pronoun, so the self is the only thing the net has actually landed. The comedy is that the speaker pities himself and mocks himself in the same breath.

The construction supports all of this. The poem is a single sentence with no punctuation until the final full stop, so it tumbles forward without pausing. The lines are short and uneven, roughly seven, four, six and four syllables, alternating longer and shorter, so the poem seems to shrink as it goes. There is no rhyme, but sound does quiet work. The long *i* runs through "wife," "cried" and "I," and the last word isolates the very sound that the verb "cried" has been carrying all along. The cry is the self. The two "that" clauses also mirror each other. "That my wife bought" is complete and competent, while "that was all I" collapses, which is an economical way to set the wife's practicality against the speaker's emptiness.

What makes the poem worth reading is how much it asks of so little text. Much of the effect comes from the title, which supplies the metaphor and the self-mockery while the body supplies only a humble scene. The poem avoids self-pity by being funny about hunger, and it avoids the cliché of the suffering artist by showing him as faintly absurd. By leaving the last sentence unfinished, it also gives the reader a small job to do: we complete the thought ourselves, and every way of completing it is a little sadder and a little funnier than the one before.

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