Wings — Poem analysis

Dave BontaContemplative

a bat in the church they light candles for the new year

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A bat gets into a church, and the congregation reaches for matches. That is the whole event, told in three lines and about thirteen syllables, yet it leaves a reader with more to think about than many poems ten times its length.

The poem's central tension is between darkness and light, but Dave Bonta never states it. He sets two images side by side and steps back. On one side is the bat, a creature of night, of caves and belfries. On the other are the candles, a human gesture of hope, and the new year, the moment when people most want a fresh start. The poem never says how these relate, and that silence is where its interest lies.

The construction is bare. There is no rhyme, no capital letter, and no punctuation at all. The first line, "a bat in the church," has no verb, so it works like a snapshot: something is simply there, hanging in the frame. The verb arrives only in the second line, "they light candles," and it belongs to people. Notice that "they" is never explained. The poem moves from animal to humans to the calendar, from a single startling object to an action to a whole span of time. It widens as it shortens, running five syllables, then four, then four.

The missing punctuation also creates ambiguity. Do they light candles because of the bat, perhaps to see it, or to push back against what it stands for? Or is the bat entirely beside the point, and the service goes on as if it weren't there? Or does the bat become part of the ritual without anyone intending it? With no commas or dashes to steer us, all three readings stay open. The final line has no full stop either, so the poem trails into the new year without closing it, which suits a poem about beginnings.

The title does the most unusual work. The word "wings" appears nowhere in the three lines. Everything inside the poem is still: a building, a row of candles, a group of people. Only the title brings in movement and flight. Reading the poem, we have to supply the bat circling overhead, the shadow crossing the ceiling, and, if we like, the candle flames shivering in the air it stirs. That last detail is our own inference, but the poem makes it easy to imagine.

"Wings" also quietly pulls in everything we associate with wings in a church: angels, doves, the idea of the spirit rising. The bat is a strange stand-in for any of these. It is a mammal rather than a bird, often thought ugly or ominous, and not at all the kind of winged visitor a congregation would choose. Yet it is the only thing in the poem that actually flies. The poem seems to ask whether the sacred has to look the way we expect it to, or whether something alive and uninvited might have as much claim on the space as the candles do.

Small sound effects support this. The short "a" in "bat" returns in "candles," a faint link between the intruder and the ceremony. "Church" ends the first line on a hard consonant, almost like a door closing, and the line break leaves a pause in which the bat hangs there unexplained. By contrast, "light" and "year" are softer, more open sounds, and the poem ends on that openness.

What makes the poem worth a student's time is how much it trusts the reader. It resembles the haiku tradition in its brevity, its seasonal marker, and its pairing of two images, though it doesn't follow the strict five-seven-five pattern. A new year is when we light our metaphorical candles and make promises about the dark months ahead. Meanwhile something wild is flying over our heads, not asking permission. The poem doesn't tell us whether that is a threat, a blessing, or just life going on, and the lack of an answer is what stays with us.

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