Wings — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

a bat in the church they light candles for the new year

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In just three short lines, this poem sets two small events side by side: a bat has gotten into a church, and people are lighting candles to mark the new year. The poem never says the two are connected, and that gap is where it gets interesting.

The speaker doesn't tell us how they feel. They simply notice, like someone standing quietly at the back of the room. Still, the details do some work. Candles suggest hope, ritual and a wish for a fresh start. The bat is an uninvited creature of the dark, flitting around a place built for order and calm. Its presence feels a little unsettling, but also oddly alive.

The title, "Wings," hints at what links them: the bat's wings and, perhaps, the flicker of flames. The mood is hushed and watchful, with a touch of wonder. The new year arrives with ceremony, but something wild shares the space with it.

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