The Catch — Poem analysis

Dave BontaContemplative

We were playing hide-&-seek. At the last moment, I dove under a black rubberized tarp that had been lying out back for several months. I heard her finish the count & come looking, rounding the corner of the house on rapid feet.

The tarp rustled from my heavy breathing. A beetle made a racket burrowing out from under from my right ear, which was pressed against the ground. She ran past, the beetle wiggled free & everything grew still.

After a while, I heard the approach of slow footfalls. This time, I held my breath as if my life depended on it. The steps came up to the edge of the tarp & stopped. “Nobody under there,” I heard her say.

Is it better to fish without luck, or to stretch a net & accept the inevitable by-catch? The silence after that second attempt has yet to end. From time to time, a harvestman runs over my carcass on seeing-eye legs. What mountain is this, I start to wonder, keeping the smooth sky from a tangled earth?

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Hide-and-seek is a game built on a pleasurable fear: the thrill of being almost found. Dave Bonta's "The Catch" starts inside that thrill and ends somewhere much colder. A child dives under a tarp, hears the seeker rush past, and is then overlooked so completely that the poem's last stanza suggests he never comes out. What begins as a memory turns, line by line, into a meditation on being lost, or dead, or both.

The first three stanzas are plain storytelling. The sentences are short and physical: "I dove under a black rubberized tarp," "She ran past," "everything grew still." The details are exact and slightly comic. The tarp has been "lying out back for several months," and a beetle makes "a racket / burrowing out from under from my right ear." That small insect does what the boy cannot. It betrays his hiding place with noise, then "wiggled free." The ampersands, which replace "and" throughout, give the telling a hurried, jotted-down look, as if the speaker were still ducking and listening while he writes.

The poem's pivot comes in the third stanza. The seeker returns with "slow footfalls," a sharp contrast to her earlier "rapid feet." This time the speaker holds his breath "as if / my life depended on it," and the line break leaves the idiom hanging for a moment. Then she says, "Nobody under there." In a children's game this is simply a mistake. In the poem it becomes almost literally true. He hid too well, and her words have the ring of a verdict. Note too how the stanza ends on her voice and not his. From here on, he is only something that is spoken about.

The fourth stanza abandons narrative for a question, and the tense changes with it. The silence "has yet to end." The boy has become "my carcass," and a harvestman "runs over" it "on seeing-eye legs." The phrase suggests the creature's long legs feeling their way ahead like a blind person's cane, and it is a strangely gentle image to attach to a body being walked over. The speaker's perspective has dropped to insect level, where the tarp can become "a mountain" holding "the smooth sky" apart from "a tangled earth." Seen from underneath, the black sheet really is a sky, smooth and featureless, and the grass and roots beneath it really are tangled. The childish hiding place has become a whole landscape, and the speaker is stuck between its two halves.

The title and the fishing question knit these ideas together. "Is it better to fish without luck, / or to stretch a net & accept the inevitable by-catch?" Read one way, the seeker is the fisher, and her failed search is the "fish without luck." Read another way, the by-catch is the speaker himself, something caught that no one wanted or looked for. "Catch" also echoes the catch of held breath and the catch in a game, where being caught is exactly what the child fears and half desires. The poem never settles which meaning wins, and I think that is deliberate. It leaves us weighing whether being sought and missed is worse than not being sought at all.

There is no rhyme and no regular meter. The free verse moves at the pace of speech, which lets the quiet ending feel like an ordinary remark and not a dramatic announcement. The stanzas grow slightly (five lines, six, five, then seven), as though the last one must stretch to hold the question the story cannot answer.

The poem matters because it makes a very small moment carry a very large one. Anyone who has played this game knows the fear of waiting too long, of staying hidden after everyone has stopped looking. Bonta takes that feeling and lets it harden into something permanent, without raising his voice. The final question is not answered, and the quiet that follows it is the poem's real subject.

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