The Catch — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

We were playing hide-&-seek. At the last moment, I dove under a black rubberized tarp that had been lying out back for several months. I heard her finish the count & come looking, rounding the corner of the house on rapid feet.

The tarp rustled from my heavy breathing. A beetle made a racket burrowing out from under from my right ear, which was pressed against the ground. She ran past, the beetle wiggled free & everything grew still.

After a while, I heard the approach of slow footfalls. This time, I held my breath as if my life depended on it. The steps came up to the edge of the tarp & stopped. “Nobody under there,” I heard her say.

Is it better to fish without luck, or to stretch a net & accept the inevitable by-catch? The silence after that second attempt has yet to end. From time to time, a harvestman runs over my carcass on seeing-eye legs. What mountain is this, I start to wonder, keeping the smooth sky from a tangled earth?

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The poem begins as a childhood memory of hide-and-seek. The speaker dives under a tarp, hears a beetle scrabbling near his ear, and stays hidden as the seeker runs past. Then she returns, slowly, and he holds his breath. She stops at the tarp's edge and says, "Nobody under there." She is wrong, and he lets her be.

In the final stanza the game seems to become something larger. The silence after her words "has yet to end," and the speaker now imagines himself a "carcass" with a harvestman crawling over him. That suggests that his success at hiding cost him something, perhaps a connection he never got back. The fishing question, about luck versus the "inevitable by-catch," hints that being found, or missing, both carry a price. The mood is quiet, eerie and regretful. The closing image of a mountain between smooth sky and tangled earth leaves him stuck between the two, still waiting.

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