Three short poems to inaugurate a new pocket notebook — Summary

Dave BontaContemplative

ravens climbing into each other’s sky circling crying out

above the road bank where the hepatica has just come into bloom, the corpse of a porcupine

carrion beetles clamber through the quills

butterflies cluster on what’s left of its mouth a hole spanned by the long, curved railings of its teeth

& down below, the pale blue blossoms swaying on their stems

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Dave Bonta's poem reads like a quick set of field notes: a walker comes across a dead porcupine beside a road, just where early spring flowers have started to bloom. Instead of looking away, the speaker looks closely. Beetles crawl through the quills, butterflies gather at the ruined mouth, and the teeth become "long, curved railings" around a hole. The ravens overhead, circling and crying, give the scene a wild, almost ceremonial backdrop.

The speaker doesn't say what they feel outright. The calm, precise details suggest fascination rather than disgust, and even a kind of respect. Death here is not hidden or softened; it's simply part of a living system, feeding insects and sitting next to the flowers. The ending, with pale blue blossoms swaying below, brings in a quiet gentleness. The mood is observant, unsentimental, and strangely peaceful, as if decay and new growth belong in the same frame.

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