Open handed — Summary

Dave BontaAnxious

in my hands the world of a beggar who is all alone and no less than one thousand people in the street

I fear every day more and more the state answering the question who is it that the weight of the war depends on

a man betrayed to the sea for security’s sake let me be godfather to a swan and steal a kiss of the night

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The poem opens with a striking contradiction: the speaker holds "the world of a beggar" who is alone, even though a thousand people fill the street. Loneliness here isn't about empty space but about being unseen. The title, "Open handed," fits this image, since a beggar's open hand asks for something, while an open hand can also be a gesture of giving.

The second stanza turns to fear. The speaker admits to dreading, more each day, how the state answers the question of who must carry "the weight of the war." The poem doesn't say who that is, but the way the question hangs suggests ordinary people pay the price.

The last stanza moves into stranger, dreamlike images: a man "betrayed to the sea" in the name of security, then a odd wish to be godfather to a swan and to "steal a kiss of the night." The mood is uneasy and tender at once. After the cold public worries, the speaker reaches for something small, gentle, and private.

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